A Long Journey By: aubrianna colemaN

Hello my name is Mimi! I live in Oceandrop front I go to Ocean Drop middle school and I'm 11,000 years old!!! I am super excited I'm going to be in 7th grade next year. But enough of me rambling I'm going to tell you one of my favorite stories!!!

It all started here, I was on my normal afternoon walk. When all a sudden I heard a loud sound. It sounded like twigs breaking but I didn't know where it was coming from.

The sound got closer. And closer and closer. There it was in front me, it was drinking the water and before I could react, there I was being slurped into the belly of a deer.

"AHHHHHH!" I screamed the deer ran faster and faster. Each time he would step down everything in his stomach shook. I felt as if I was in a roller coaster. I wanted the deer to stop but it wouldn't, it just kept running. I kept screaming to see if the deer would hear me but he didn't.

Finally after what seemed like hours of running the deer came to a stop. Everything was still, but in my mind I knew what was coming... I would be free but in the worst way as possible.

There I was on the floor. That fourious beast was already down the path prancing into the forest soon to disappear. But all I could think about was the stench it was unbearable, I tried holding my breath but that didn't even work. It smelt like rotten milk was sitting in the sun for hours. I tried getting up but I fell back down so I was sitting there for hours.

But the good news was that the puddle was beginning to get smaller and smaller. Before I knew it I was floating in mid air. I was evaporating.

I tired holding onto a tree but the wind got the best of me and I was going higher and higher. I finally reached the clouds the sun smiled at me I smiled back at it.

"What brings you up here little raindrop? Aren't you supposed to be in Ocean drop?" Asked the sun

"I think I'm what's the word." I kept scratching my head trying to figure out the word we learned about it in science class. I finally remembered it "IM EVAPORATING!!!" I screamed

"What about my school my home what am I going to do?! I need to do a-"

"Don't worry about it you will find your way back I promise." Said the sun after interrupting me

I was condensing but I started to feel fat all a sudden I was a white puffy cloud I still felt like I gained 500 pounds but I was super fluffy.

I started getting heavier and heavier I started turning grey and sad all I sudden I got so heavy I began to cry. I then started precipitating.

I felt like I was falling for hours and hours on end but I wasn't in a forest no more I was in a grass field.

I layed in the puddle for almost a hour but the puddle just kept getting smaller and smaller.

I was then able to stand up as the puddle was dissolving into the dirt. I kept walking and walking intill I reached a plant. I then catapulted myself onto the plant and sat on the leaf and feel asleep. I woke up to see a ugly beast staring at me sniffing the flower.

It's black scary eyes. His super heavy breathing. He sniffed me out like a blood hound. It was scary,

"AHHHHHH!!!" I screamed.

The creature titled his head and licked me up.

"Ruff ruff." The creature said with a whimper.

I tried to escape but it was to late he stopped... again I would be free but still.... I closed my eyes s turned my small fingers into a fist I squinted my eyes and before I knew it I was on the ground again.

This time I didn't think about the smell I just missed my family... I wanted to go home I missed my family. But before I knew it I made a new family.

I then began floating once again or evaporating.

Before I knew it I was back in the clouds the sun was there but he was sleeping I then began to condense. Then the cloud started crying but this time I was in a lake.

When I fell from the sky I accumulated into a lake. Before I knew it I started a new school. I then met new people. And I was able to tell people my story. And in my head I knew I would find my way home eventually.

Hope you enjoyed!!!


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