thesis: Out of all the data we collected our group has concluded that we should save the African Penguin over the Andean Bear and the Boa Snake.
main reason #1: Cheapest to save out of the three.
main reason #2: fertilize the ground
main reason#3: There's more research on the penguin than the other animals
animal not being saved: Andean Bear and the Boa Snake
reason why (constraints): not enough research on the Andean bear because it is very shy around people . If one species of Boa disappears, others would take its place.
V. Cost to conserve/resources required by the species
A. introduction (topic sentence): We are saving the African Penguin because it would be cheaper to save over the Andean Bear
b. evidence #1: African Penguin doesn’t need a lot in its enclosure.
1. analysis of evidence A: Andean bear needs trees, shade, leaves, a cave, a place to hid, and toys.
2. analysis of evidence B: The African penguin needs water, rocks, and shade.