Erin does excellent editing by jamari griffin, Noble Street College Prep

Erin Wright, is working on a summary lead essay in the computer lab. During this class students learned to edit their news/summary leads.
Revising her paper, Erin Wright focuses on understanding what it means to edit. While in the class Wright reads comments to improve her work.
notes are taken by Erin, which are used to help with editing. during this session, students were presented material in which taking notes were crucial
notes are continuously taken to understand key components of news writing. In class students needed to know what was acceptable in writing
Students review a presentation. Students learned to write in third person
Students discuss important topics. While outside, Erin and a friend headed to a coffee shop.
Friends wait inside a coffee shop between classes. HSJI students have free time between classes in which they spend time together

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