Number one: That Pax met a vixen and her brother and the girls name is bristle. They both fighting and pax was by them when they where fighting.
Number two:I liked that pax and Peter played with a toy soldier. And that pax was in the forest. And that Pax was devastated that Peter was gone.
Number three:That pax was wanting Peter to come back.And that he was curious about how to hunt.
Number four: That pax loved his boy Peter. And he always got fed by Peter.Pax was falling into pieces because Peter was gone.
Number five: I liked the part were pax was looking for his boy Peter. And that pax was waiting in the forest for Peter to come.