Poetry Collection by Carson Ochoa block 5

“Believe “ from the album "Notes from the Underground"

by Hollywood undead

chorus:I can't believe That when I breathe That there's something good inside of me Just one good thing inside of me So close to me That memory Of that one good thing inside of me Just one good thing inside of me verse: Yeah If I went out the back door, nobody would stop me But, where would I go?'Cause I ain't ever had a real home So, what do I know?So, I could keep runnin', hide until they find me But, what would that do?If they could only know what I knew What would it do?I shoulda' seen the writin' on the wall Instead, I'm left to fall 'Cause the longer I'm away,I'll always stay the same Lookin' back, when I thought I knew it all instead, I'm left to fall Did I throw it all away?I can't believe That when I breathe That there's something good inside of me Just one good thing inside of me So close to me That memory Of that one good thing inside of me Just one good thing inside of me Yeah Don't you know, little boy, They'll lay you to waste, man Little do they know,* every song is a life span *Yeah, they've taken one, but I'm takin' my last chance To hold all we know and let go with both hands Though, don't you know that plots are made from concrete Right through the stone, can you hear my heartbeat?Beats through my bones, like no memory left me Not for a second or a minute when I dream I wanna go home, like a home that I'll keep You can dig six or sixty-six feet We can live forever, still your misery missed me Hold this song together with a bottle of whiskey Look into the mirror, and the lines that time drew Seen 'em painted white in the eyes that shine through My heart beats heavy in an open chest And, I wanna say goodbye, but there's nobody left chorus: I can't believe That when I breathe That there's something good inside of me Just one good thing inside of me So close to me That memory Of that one good thing inside of just one one good thing inside of me verse: Yeah I broke it all, and I put to the test Put your hands in mine and feel this emptiness* There's no beat in my chest Cause there's nothin' left No, it ain't goodbye, it's a last caress What's another dream?You could hardly sleep Can you believe bad things only happen to me?God knows one day, you will finally see That's scars will heal, but we're meant to bleed Do you realize I would lie for you?Please out my last breath, I would die for you I know I'm no good, but my heart beats true You know I'm gonna fight, though I must be scared to lose You took me in, and I f####d it up again And an empty promise, no, I won't pretend 'Cause in the end, we need someone to solve 'em Nobody can fix me if I'm part of the problem chorus:I can't believe That when I breathe That there's something good inside of me Just one good thing inside of me So close to me That memory Of that one good thing inside of me Just one good thing inside of me Yeah

Metaphor

The metaphor "every song is a life span" is comparing a song to a life span by music being the only thing that keeps some people holding onto life. It was used to show the effects of music in a depressed persons life . The music will either give someone the will to keep themselves alive or to take their life.

The second example of a metaphor in this song is " put your hands in mine and feel this emptiness" its comparing his life to an empty vessel. This means as if he were emotionless and in other words stuck in neutral not able to feel. His body's not warm anymore as he was to have lost that life force inside of him.

album released January 8, 2013

Jorel Decker, Daniel Murillo, et all "Believe" Notes from the Underground • Copyright © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC, Universal Music Publishing Group Released 8 Jan , 2013 https://play.google.com/music/preview/Tsh76fasrdn2l3ckwlmtuadkn7q?lyrics=1&utm_source=google&utm_medium=search&utm_campaign=lyrics&pcampaignid=kp-lyric , Google play music , Google 2016 Date accessed 6 Dec. 2016

“Gravity” from the Album "F.E.A.R."

Papa Roach

chorus:I was there on the day truth died

Blood on my hands* throw 'em up in the sky

Verse: I was the number one sinner, no less

My life was a lie, and my wish was a death

I fell in love with the ways of the world

Money, the fame, the boose, the girls

But I couldn't stay faithful, if I've tried

I turned into a devil, you could see it in my eyes

I blacked out, told everything I ever did

I couldn't take all the lies I was living with

I broke your heart, woke up the next day

My bags outside, yelling, "Get the hell away!

not a husband, not a father, you’re a pig

And you can't never change all the things that you did!"

That's when I knew it, it wouldn't last

You never get away, when you're running from the past

I will fly into outer space

chorus:I float away, but you're my gravity

I will die to love another day

We rise again and lose our gravity

verse:I'm a broken man, I'm full of sin

I'm sick of all this hell that I'm living in

And I can't escape it, this is how it feels

When you try to numb the pain with a thousand pills

You tore me down, wished that I was dead

Said you wanna sleep alone in another bed

But when I push away, you only pull me closer

It's only over when we both wanna say it's over

I gotta change this is not who I am

I wanna start over wanna try this again

You're everything I need, everything I'm not

So pull the trigger, give me one more shot

chorus:I will fly into outer space

I float away, but you're my gravity

(I will die) die to love another day

We rise again and lose our gravity

Verse: You love me, you hate me, you kiss me, you break me

You lifted me up just to watch as you broke me

you promised me, looked me straight in the eyes*

No matter what you say, I don't know truth from the lies

I helped you up, like I always do

I forgave you for your sins and I carried you through them

No matter how hard we fought, we always knew

You will bleed for me, and I will bleed for you

chorus:Fly into outer space

I float away, but you're my gravity

Die to love another day

We rise again and lose our gravity

I will fly into outer space

I float away, but you're my gravity

(I will die) die to love another day

We rise again and lose our gravity

I will fly into outer space

I float away, but you're my gravity

(I will die) die to love another day

We rise again and lose our gravity

Baby, we can float away

IMAGERY

The song "Gravity" by Papa Roach uses imagery with " blood on my hands" to show that it's their fault that they have hurt someone physically.

The second example of imagery is "you promised me , looked straight in my eyes" portrays the situation of a husband looking his wife in the eyes promising he won't hurt her again but will anyways.

Jacoby Dakota Shaddix, et al "Gravity" F.E.A.R. • Copyright © Cadium Music Publishing, BMG Rights Management US, LLC Released 27 Jan 2015 https://play.google.com/music/preview/Tn3tthopcssr5jzfzyjqeysscka?lyrics=1&utm_source=google&utm_medium=search&utm_campaign=lyrics&pcampaignid=kp-lyrics Google play music , Google 2016 Accessed 6 Dec 2016

"Papercut" on the Album "Hybrid Theory"

Linkin Park

Why does it feel like night today?

Something in here's not right today.

Why am I so uptight today?

Paranoia's all I got left

I don't know what stressed me first

Or how the pressure was fed

But I know just what it feels like

To have a voice in the back of my head*

It's like a face that I hold inside

Like a face that awakes when I close my eyes

A face watches every time I lie

A face that laughs every time I fall

(And watches everything)

So I know that when it's time to sink or swim

That the face inside is hearing me

Right underneath my skin

It's like I'm paranoid lookin' over my back

It's like a whirlwind inside of my head*

It's like I can't stop what I'm hearing within

It's like the face inside is right beneath my skin

I know I've got a face in me

Points out all my mistakes to me

You've got a face on the inside too and

Your paranoia's probably worse

I don't know what set me off first but I know what I can't stand

Everybody acts like the fact of the matter is

I can't add up to what you can but

Everybody has a face that they hold inside

A face that awakes when I close my eyes

A face watches every time they lie

A face that laughs every time they fall

(And watches everything)

So you know that when it's time to sink or swim

That the face inside is watching you too

Right inside your skin

It's like I'm paranoid lookin' over my back

It's like a whirlwind inside of my head

It's like I can't stop what I'm hearing within

It's like the face inside is right beneath my skin

It's like I'm paranoid lookin' over my back

It's like a whirlwind inside of my head

It's like I can't stop what I'm hearing within

It's like the face inside is right beneath my skin

The face inside is right beneath your skin

The face inside is right beneath your skin

The face inside is right beneath your skin

The sun goes down

I feel the light betray me

It's like I'm paranoid lookin' over my back

It's like a whirlwind inside of my head

It's like I can't stop what I'm hearing within

It's like I can't stop what I'm hearing within

It's like I can't stop what I'm hearing within

It's like the face inside is right beneath my skin

Brad Delson, Chester Charles Bennington, et al "Papercut" Hybrid Theory • Copyright © Universal Music Publishing Group Released 24 Oct 2000 https://play.google.com/music/preview/Trtnbowvdty7xfn4xtpxk3iq3je?lyrics=1&utm_source=google&utm_medium=search&utm_campaign=lyrics&pcampaignid=kp-lyrics Google play music , Google 2016 accessed 6 Dec 2016

Simile

The song "Papercut" by Linkin park uses similes to make certain comparisons . The first simile " I know what it's like to have a voice inside of my head" compares the stress of negative thoughts to an inner person inside of the mind influencing every move in life.

The second simile " Its like a whirlwind inside of my head" compares all the conflicting thoughts that chasing around and around inside a persons head trying to get out on top to a whirlwind that has the hot and cold air chase each other.

"Living in The SK"

Carson Ochoa

In this world we feel we don't belong

we have it implanted into our minds that anything can go wrong

as the leaders of the misunderstood try to do the people we know immense amount of good

the constant struggle of how you are treated will never be defeated

like a monster it never truly dies it's just reincarnated into another problem for you and I

the soldiers protecting your mind are always suspecting another attack from the forces that through the courses of time will be the ultimate people to see behind the scars and hurt

on no occasion will they be the ones to drag you into the dirt

love what is it , it's how far you are willing to go for the peace inside of a person going after it represented like chasing a dove

this isn't a Prince Charming and Snow White fairytale*

it's much realer though it's no movie trailer

crying out for help as though we're in a Friday the Thirteenth* movie

we get through it though like a nightmare we come back awake and get out of it but we still have to deal with it

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