My essay was handing in a hard copy
The tone I have used is alarmist.
My intended impact is to inform the government that this is a bad idea to inforce a licence to become a parent.
The strongest persuasive techniques that I have used is evidence, inclusive language and appeal.
What went well?
I have finished my work on time and completed all aspects of the wisdom level.
Even better if?
I could have used more persuasive techniques to engage the audience more. My paragraphs where probably not long enough either.
Where to next?
I'm aiming to complete the cat on time and to the wisdom level, I also want to edit and correct my work to the best of my ability.