Surprise By: Elaine Rees

Rachel is looking up the car she wants.

Once upon a time there was a girl named Rachel. Rachel was a bright 16 year old girl who lived with her Mom and her Dad and her younger brother. Rachel's birthday was coming up and she wanted a new set of wheels for her birthday but her parents said no.

Rachel at the store to get part supplies.

It was only 3 days to her birthday and she had so much to do. First she had to go to the store and buy all the supplies she needed for the party. She called the bakery and told them what kind of cake she wanted. When she got home she sent texts to all her friends telling them that she was going to have a party.

The decorations

The next day she got a call from the bakery telling her that the cake she ordered was ready. So Rachel asked mom if her mom could go pick the cake up because she still had to decorate the house. Well she was decorating she got a bunch of calls from her friends saying they couldn't come to her party. Rachel was so sad she did all this work for nothing so she thought.

Rachel getting ready for the day.

The next day Rachel woke up and decided she was going to make this day the best even though her friends were not going to be there. Rachel got ready for the day, went down stairs to eat and all her friend and family were there. Rachel started crying tears of joy because she thought no one was coming but they all came. After Rachel said hi to everyone her parents wanted to show her something out side. So Rachel and all her friends and family followed her outside and in the driveway was a brand new car. Rachel started crying this was the second surprise she experienced that day.

Rachel with her new car


Created with images by Pexels - "art balloons birthday" • Romain Toornier - "PRECIOUS TIME"

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